Dear Phil. > I have attempted to address all comments: > > http://wiki.centos.org/HowTos/SoftwareRAIDonCentOS5 > > Give me your best shot! :-D Much better now. You have already addressed most of the issues. Here are some comments, still: You wrote: 'usually either ATA or SATA' please add SCSI here, too. ... If you are planning to setup a RAID1, I still wonder why not to place /boot on a raid partition? ... Could you please name 'Section X' to something more common, e.g. 'Basic Installation Instructions', 'Bootloader Setup' ... Best Regards Marcus