[CentOS-docs] Comments on draft TipsAndTricks/InstallWebminRepo page

[Vladislav Rastrusny]

Applied your fixes, thanks a lot!

2009/5/13 Phil Schaffner <Philip.R.Schaffner at nasa.gov>:
> Apropos http://wiki.centos.org/TipsAndTricks/InstallWebminRepo
>
> Suggested changes (mostly nit-picky :-) ...
>
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> Change:
>
> Webmin is a web-based interface ...
>
> to:
>
> [http://www.webmin.com/index.html WebMin] is a web-based interface ...
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> Change:
>
> When you install WebMin from repository yum keeps an eye on new WebMin
> versions (for example, security-related releases) and when you issue
> "yum upgrade" you will see if a new WebMin version available.
>
> to:
>
> When [http://www.webmin.com/ WebMin] is installed from a repository, bug
> fixes and security patches can be automated as are other system updates,
> and managed using yum.
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> Change:
>
> Login to your server as root (you may login as user and then su to root
> if your system is set up this way).
>
> to:
>
> [:TipsAndTricks/BecomingRoot:Become root.]
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> Change:
>
> Then issue the following command to allow execution of this file by the
> shell:
>
> to:
>
> Make the file executable:
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> Change:
>
> Ok. WebMin repo and WebMin itself is now installed.
>
> to:
>
> The WebMin repo and application are now installed.
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>
> Very nice page.  One of these days I'll get around to actually trying it.
>
> Phil
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