[CentOS-docs] Comments on draft TipsAndTricks/InstallWebminRepo page

Wed May 13 13:03:16 UTC 2009
Phil Schaffner <Philip.R.Schaffner at NASA.gov>

Apropos http://wiki.centos.org/TipsAndTricks/InstallWebminRepo

Suggested changes (mostly nit-picky :-) ...

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Webmin is a web-based interface ...

to:

[http://www.webmin.com/index.html WebMin] is a web-based interface ...
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When you install WebMin from repository yum keeps an eye on new WebMin 
versions (for example, security-related releases) and when you issue 
"yum upgrade" you will see if a new WebMin version available.

to:

When [http://www.webmin.com/ WebMin] is installed from a repository, bug 
fixes and security patches can be automated as are other system updates, 
and managed using yum.
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Login to your server as root (you may login as user and then su to root 
if your system is set up this way).

to:

[:TipsAndTricks/BecomingRoot:Become root.]
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Then issue the following command to allow execution of this file by the 
shell:

to:

Make the file executable:
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Ok. WebMin repo and WebMin itself is now installed.

to:

The WebMin repo and application are now installed.
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Very nice page.  One of these days I'll get around to actually trying it.

Phil