On Thu, 2012-07-12 at 13:07 -0600, Ed Heron wrote: > On Wed, 2012-07-11 at 19:40 -0400, Brian Mathis wrote: > > > > The use of "mv -v ...{,_}" is too clever for this kind of educational > > document, and should be changed to spell out the full "mv" command. I > > get what you're doing there, but the purpose of the document is not to > > teach clever uses of bash, it's to make it obvious to people that > > you're renaming the file. It will trip up the flow of reading for all > > but the most knowledgeable users, and users who don't understand it > > will be totally lost. > > I'm not trying to be clever, I just don't like to type it twice if I > can avoid it and the typing the higher the chance for a typo. I don't > have a problem having both forms. I'll add it and see what you think. > > > In most documents and scripts, I usually spell out the short form > > options as well, such as using "--verbose". Short forms save you > > typing, but documentation should not trip people up if they don't know > > what the option means. > > Normally, I expect, if people don't understand a command, they will > refer to the man page for the command. However, to my constant > disappointment, I understand that many people aren't looking for long > term knowledge improvement, they are looking for a recipe to blindly > follow. > > > Also, I find the use of "_" to be obtuse and highly error prone if one > > were to actually run a server that way. It's far more obvious to use > > "disabled", which makes it very clear that those items are disabled. > > It may work for you but only because that's a convention you came up > > with so you're used to it, but we're not in dos 8.3 days with > > filenames, so why not be more descriptive? > > Having both forms should make it plain that people can use any > convention they wish. System administration is not a fixed target. > Like many things, there are many ways to accomplish the same result. > When approaching a system that someone else is administrating, we should > try to maintain the existing conventions instead of forcing our own > ideas onto a server for which we are not the primary responsible party. > > > In section 6.4, is there a reason not to make a "vhosts.conf" file > > that contains the "Include" in the in the conf.d/ directory, instead > > of appending to the httpd.conf, or do you run into ordering issues > > there? I try to avoid changing the distro files if possible. > > Sections 6 and 7 are optional. There are certainly arguments against > customization. In the past, upgrades might have replaced all files > including configuration files. In that case, creating a vhosts.conf > file in the conf.d directory to separate the directive would have been a > must. However, the Linux distributions I have used for the past decade > or so have avoided replacing existing configuration files, expecting > they might be customized. > > That said, I like the suggestion. It would allow for the virtual host > files to be packaged into an RPM file that could be installed on > multiple web hosts. > > > > > ❧ Brian Mathis I made the changes I've described about a week ago. Brian, does that satisfy your concerns? Does anybody else agree with Brian? Have the changes I've made make it easier to read the document?